Saturday, 8 January 2011
Director's Commentary
Friday, 7 January 2011
Audience Feedback
Planning Diary 3
Jack and I decided to continue with filming and so proceeded with our third day of it, thankfully the snow had returned and so the entire day consisted of the pair of us patching up the snow shots that had issues, for example a tripod was seen within frame, and so we completely re filmed this shot. As well as this Jack and I dove into poster research where Jack would find some posters which we are looking to imitate and I would analyse then to find a deeper meaning and help us when creating our own poster. I decided to write an initial script for what we have been discussing in making the movie, I took into prospect most of the shots we are going to use as well as the dialogue. Whilst Jack posted about the numerous decisions on props and costume.
Week 11
We began the process of narrowing down the music choice to ensure it would be perfect, taking into account of a few different songs I posted one which we were very impressed with and contemplated using. Jack and I then found Skype, whilst talking over it we thought to ourselves why not textually analyse the movie Signs, this adds an interesting edge to a textual analysis and provided us with the opportunity to work together giving off our own opinions on why the director used the shorts.The filming then began to get a lot more serious, as the snow had melted and there was no way of getting it back, we scrapped everything and started over. Thankfully as we had already done it before, Jack and I were experienced and knew exactly what we were doing so were able to get through the first 3 minutes of the film itself with no hassle and once Harvey and Michael arrived we were able to finish the film nicely. Jack and I then edited the entire film during and after school to a standard we were all very pleased with. I then decided on the music choice of the film which fitted perfectly thankfully.
Now the film has been finished I proceeded to decide what magazine between Sight and Sound and Total Film I would structure the article in, I posted a video as well as wrote a few lines describing why I decided on total film, and then proceeded to write the entire article the next day. During this process Jack created a poster for the film, which we drew influence from, shown previously within a blog post. Now that the group has uploaded the video onto the blog, we individually took up the evaluations and completed them alone.
Thursday, 6 January 2011
Methods of marketing our short film
We could create our own Facebook page which gives details about the films and allows viewers to discuss on a forum what they thought of the film. It also allows us the team behind the film to get in contact with the viewers gaining vital audience feedback.
Twitter could be extremely usefull aswell as obtaining vital audience feedback, we could keep fans in the know of what we are up to regarding other productions and ideas.
To market our product we could create a 30 second teaser of our short film or unseen footage. This could be shown in cinemas, so that millions of people around the country would see. WE would display information such as where our short film is showing or what channel on TV.
Also, at the London short film festival we could air our short film, this will attract huge attention and create hysteria around our short film. We could also show our preivous film, Deceit, this would create an interest around us as a team and maybe even create a fan base.
Our target audience
Pinaccle - Our editing software
Pinaccle also allowed us to burn our short film straight to DVD. All we needed to do was buy a DVD and put it into the drive, commence the burning process and there we go our product is on a DVD which can be viewed on a computer aswell as any DVD player.
Finishing the film - Editing
We managed to edit the film in about two and a half hours as we would watch the footage numerous times to look out for clips or sounds that may have looked out of place. Within this time we also received feedback from many of our peers telling us what they liked and disliked and this helped us very much in making our final tweaks to the film. Overall we received really good feedback from our peers and many of them were especially impressed with the "Cloning shot" which was essentially a shot of Anthony looking at his own body. After we editing the film we had to put the music in and balance it. Anthony supplied the music by bringing in his USB memory stick and together we tweaked the settings to get the perfect balance. We managed to create many musical stings at crucial parts of the story that I believe are extremely effective.
Overall the editing process went extremely well and we managed turn footage that we filmed on the same day into a film that we are all proud of.
Final Music Choice

Final Credits
Now the film is complete and we can view it over, we feel this is an outstanding way to portray the credits, as it somewhat clears some unclear air that the audience may have as to what the film itself was about. The decision to do this came from one of our main influences "Inception". Similar to Inception we have undergone a somewhat startling conclusion which asks questions, as the title appears dramatically with a bang in sound. Once the title appears we were then able to place the actual credits in, we felt that it's best to keep them simple, as not to take away interest from the films conclusion, so like Inception, a simple black screen was used with the font white as to stand out in a rather subtle tone. Making the credits short was something that the group felt important, so the audience can immediately react and compare ideas of what happened, so to keep it simple we placed the actors names, the directors and the producers. The image above shows an example of how Inception credited their actors, we feel this effective and attempted to imitate this with our own twist.
Todays final filming - it rained
However, we came across one surprise which was that it began to rain really heavily. Luckily, it all started coming down before we started filming. It would have been a huge problem if it started raining mid way through filming as the continuity editing would have been completely ruined. Also, the camera lense started to become wet, a problem we came across last year. With our product deceit, we did not realise there was water on the lense untill uploaded the footage onto the school computers, and there were massive sploges on every single shot, this completely ruined all of the footage, so to overcome this and to allow this not to happen to us this time round, we constantly wiped the lense and I went home and got an umbrella so the person who was filming could hold it up to sheild the camera from the rain.
Below is a photo of Jack demonstrating how we used the umbrella to shield the camera:
Final costumes
As you can see, Anthony is wearing normal clothes like a normal person. We wanted Anthony to come across as a normal average male. Anthony's acting was extremely strong as in the footage his facial expressions come across as very scared and confused.
Filming finished
We will record a video diary tomorrow whilst editing.
Wednesday, 5 January 2011
Final Script
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Ancillary Task - Magazine Review - Choosing the Magazine
I decided to look into each article with much more detail, to ensure that the decsion made in the video, is the correct one.


Firstly, Total Film (Left). At first glance its clear to see that this article does in fact stand out. Likewise to the other reviews that appear within the magazine. The use of the large image draws the reader in and somewhat entices them to read deeper into the review. The use of the image I feel is an extremely effective way in making sure people actually read the article, rather than skim through and miss it out. This is dissimilar to Sight and Sound which takes a completely different approach and completely scraps the idea of an image and goes directly to the text. This may somewhat put off the reader as the text could seem rather intimidating, notwithstanding the fact that many reviews from the magazine Sight and Sound appear to come across this way, meaning people may not notice our review if they are just skimming through.
When deciding which magazine to choose I feel it most important to ensure that the magazine will relate to our chosen target audience, in our case that is ages 15-21. Despite the fact that Total Film's review does seem to be a much more engaging article than Sight and Sound, it is worth mentioning that the film we are creating is aimed at those who have an extremely big interest in film, whether they're studying film or even film makers. It would seem that Sight and Sound would appear to that type of audience, giving off the more professional feel with the article itself.
Taking into account these two examples, I feel it best to select the magazine Total Film. Simply due to the fact that I feel their articles are filled with much more content than Sight and Sound, what with the appealing visuals and overall verdict, these will appeal more to our targeted audience and hopefully draw the attention from those we wouldn't necessarily place into this category, but rather would be drawn in by the article itself.
Failed costumes - as to why we didnt use them
Filming - finished?
Tuesday, 4 January 2011
Script- Second Draft
Textual Analysis: Signs
Monday, 3 January 2011
Narrowing Down The Music Choice
Straight away we noticed the first available song ticked all the right boxes, its name, "Paregoric". Upon listening to the song together we were very unsure what to make of it, it was unlike anything we had ever heard before, containing not so much a rhythm but more of an eerie bass line which continues to pulse throughout the entire 4:52 of the song. The song then breaks the bass with the chiming of bells creating an extremely creepy feel to it. After listening to the song twice we knew it was perfect for the film, as not only does it give off the dark, mysterious and eerie feel we are going for, but it also will fit perfectly in the background for those scenes with dialogue also. We will certainly be considering this song for our film.
Music uploaded by Jack Windsor:
Fourth Day of Shooting
We also had to stop filming quite abruptly as the camera ran out of charge. We were aware that the camera was low on battery but decided to film anyway as we are not in possession of a charger at the moment so we had to film whatever we could. This was annoying at first but gave me and Anthony more time to discuss how we are going to make the dialogue section of our film successful.
The Inspiration of the Game "Limbo"
A specific inspiration that sparked not so much the story line but totally the concept of a lone wanderer as well as the Idea of being trapped in your own self conscious was the Xbox Arcade game "Limbo"
As you can see by the front cover of the game it matches almost everything I have described above. Bellow are a few screen shots of the game play and it will become clear as to why we see this game as such an inspiration for creating a haunting ominous effect by playing with the Idea of loneliness.
As you can see from the various screen shots this kind setting would obviously be difficult to capture in real life on film however we want to really be able to duplicate or even enhance the sense of loneliness the protagonist will have to tackle in our final film.
Shooting Diary #5
Audio Podcast #4
Sunday, 2 January 2011
Props/Costume

Anthony and I decided to discuss what props and costumes we are going to use in our short film. The first prop we needed was a mobile phone which Anthony kindly provided. We wanted to establish that the character was sophisticated and middle/higher class and therefore Anthony's phone was perfect as it is a blackberry. We needed the phone as it shows that the character cannot get in contact with anyone as there is no signal available on his phone.
Update: During editing we all agreed that the phone looked very out of place and odd in our film as it is shown once and is never shown again. Because of this we decided to edit the phone out of our film completely.

Another prop we used was a fake syringe as we needed a shot of the main protagonist injecting himself with heroine. I found one lying around the house which made things easy as we didn't need to purchase one. The syringe itself looks very realistic which will help make our film seem more professional.
We needed a watch for the professor character as he needs to alert the protagonist that time was is standing still and not moving. Again I found this prop lying around the house and therefore we did not need to purchase one.
Update After discussion we decided to get rid of the professor character and therefore no longer need the watch to be present in our film.

For the main protagonist we wanted him to seem sophisticated and therefore chose him to have him wearing a leather jacket and scarf combo. We believe this worked very well as it makes the character look smart and sophisticated but also gives off an adventurous vibe e.g. Indiana Jones
Tuesday, 21 December 2010
Ancillary Task - Analysis of Horror Posters
Firstly, The Ring. Directed by Gore Verbinski in 2001, the ring tells the story of a journalist investigating a video tape which seems to cause the death of anyone who watches it within a week. At first glance of the poster, the title stands out the most being in the perfect position to draw the focus of the audience. "The Ring" is a rather vague title creating many enigmas as it could in fact have many different meanings giving off a horror vibe. This is enhanced by the apparent handwriting the title is written in, almost as if it is written by a child, and also making the audience wonder why it is written this way. This is further reinforced by the fact it is written in white giving off the innocence of the child.
The picture of the circular ring itself is clearly connoting what the film is about, and as is it is somewhat faded and distorted it represents the horror genre. The films tag line "Before you die you see" gives off enigmas to the audience, making them wonder what in fact they will see, thus drawing them into the film to answer them un-answered questions that the tag line is so subtly posing.
Through the colour coding that the poster is showing it is very clear that the film itself is a horror. Black being the main backdrop of the poster represents death and darkness, whilst the white gives off a contrast that makes the poster stand out and entice the audience. This is also supported by the distorted handwriting and fade image giving an omnibus feel to the poster, as at first glance, the audience is unsure of what the film is about as the poster is only offering subtle clues which are hard to follow.

Secondly, The Eye. In the film a woman receives and eye transplant that allows her to see in to the supernatural world. At first glance of the poster the main focus is in fact the image of an eye. One thing i like about this poster is that it is unlike many others from the genre horror, as the lighting itself is at an extremely high key but around the eye the shading is of an extremely low key. This lighting shift could perhaps give the audience the impression that the person who's eye this is may appear as normal through the high key lighting, but could in fact hold a very dark secret which links to the persons eye, and in turn showing the film is within the horror genre.
In terms of the text, the title of the film links to the image being shown, "The Eye" appears directly bellow the image and the fact the the word "Eye" is written in bold block capitals suggest that the film revolves around this and connotes that the film is based around an eye. Its also noticeable that the poster shows the name of an extremely well known actress, this marketing technique could some what convince people to see the film just to see the main actress "Jessica Alba", also the fact that it appears just in the middle of the text and the image suggests that her eye is the focus and with her name being written in a red font suggests anger, danger and blood linking it back to the chosen genre of the film and letting the audience subtly know what they are getting themselves into.
Lastly, Gothika tells the story of a woman who wakes up as a patient in an asylum with no memory of why she is there or what she has done. When fist viewing the poster it is clear to see if follows the typical codes and conventions of a horror movie poster with its low key lighting, however, it has its own stamp on it with the blue colour used, connoting evil and a cold feeling. The cold feeling is supported by the apparent rain which appears perhaps suggesting that a main theme in the film is the weather or maybe even the film itself takes place within a storm.The point made previous about the storm can be linked directly to the font used on the title "Gothika", the colour appears to have a somewhat, electric blue feel to it, as if it were the same colour of lightning. Likewise to "The Ring" and its font the font used on the title appears to have been written by a child, with its oddly placed capitals and strange font itself giving off a haunting feel to the poster and suggesting that perhaps a child plays a huge role in the film. The picture itself is of what appears to be the protagonist Halle Berry, its clear to the audience that the person being shown is Halle Berry is due to the text stating the name of the main character, something that many posters seem to do as another marketing technique. However, this is not a standard picture of the actress it shows her face looking dazed and confused, directly at the person looking at the poster, enticing the audience to look at the poster and notice on her left arm are the words "Not alone". It appears that the writing on her arm matches that of the title perhaps suggesting that what we can only assume of a child wrote this on her and is perhaps haunting her, which is shown by her facial expression.
Poster Influences
Monday, 20 December 2010
Third Day of Filming
Day three of filming basically consisted of patching up the shots in the snow, as it seems the snow has stopped for quite a while. It gave us time to prepare for the transition of snow to sun, so we stopped filming in the middle of a pan, and once the pan has finished, I will appear with no snow surrounding. These noticeable shifts in weather are key to our story line and play an important role in the protagonist finding out where he is. Jack and I were extremely pleased with today's filming and feel we achieved everything we set out to do and are excited to film the remainder of our film in the near future.
Friday, 17 December 2010
Music Influences - Silent Hill
Jack and I are working closely together in searching for the perfect music for our film, we are highly influenced by many different types of new media technologies, one being video games as mentioned previously. One game which is very well known for it's use of music is Silent Hill 2 and the very memorable song I think we should bare in mind when choosing our music is entitled "Promise". Where the music is in many ways mysterious, dark and eerie, 3 very key words Jack and I often refer to when discussing what type of music we are looking for. By using the website Free Play Music we are able to type key words into the search bar and browse through the website using this, narrowing down all songs and finally deciding what one we will go with. Jack and I have planned to meet up on the 18th December, where we will decide there and then what songs to choose. As the other members of our group are unable to attend we are going to show them the song we have decided to choose and hope they enjoy it as much as we do.Thursday, 16 December 2010
Planning Diary 2
Similar to week 4 we continued with the Limbo blogs, Jack created a questionaire to help us aim the film at a partcular intended audience. As a group we then proceeded to take responsibility and discuss certain ideas with eachother to help create a story we all agree with. We did this by using Harvey's iPhone to record a conversation with eachother and too also exploit another piece of new media technology to give a more interesting feel to the post. Harvey then blogged about what type of genre our film would be, and came to the conclusion that it will be a 'Horror', based around the influences we have had.
Week 6
Jack and I also decided within this week it would be best to begin filming our final film. However, Harvey and Michael were unable to come with us due to school work, and told us they will meet us at the location later. We arrived to at the location and began to shoot around 1:30 of the film (fully edited). We achieved our goal and felt we could have gone on for longer, however, due to the camera running out of charge we had to return back to school and tell Harvey and Michael how the filming went as they joined us in the editing room. We are all extremely pleased with how it turned out and are looking forward to continuing with the filming.
Week 9
The group decided on what editing software we felt would be best to use, we settled with pinnacle as it was extremely accessible for the entire group and all desired effects could be achieved on it. After this the group decided to film, in the snowy weather, Jack and I went out and began filming the first few minutes of the film, but were devastated as the camera ran out of charge, once the footage had been edited by us, we decided to return some day soon to finally finish. Upon arrival the next we were greeted with a problem, that the snow had melted. We attempted to film without the snow, but looking over the footage within the editing room Jack and I were not pleased with the outcome and so we called of filming till Thursday (as it was going to snow that day). Whilst not filming, we decided to take the initiative and research into title ideas, we came up with many suggestions but then decided to wait until the film was completed until we decided the name itself. Notwithstanding the fact that I decided to dive deeper into music research, drawing influence from scenes within the film Silent Hill which in some ways is similar to ours.
Wednesday, 15 December 2010
Choice of Editing Software
When editing our film our group must ensure that the film itself is always constructed with professionalism, as we are trying to steer away our film from looking like a typical student film. We must ensure that the film is at the highest quality we can get it with outstanding editing techniques to help create the effect of professionalism. With this editing software we are able to add all relevant effects to a film, such as slow motion where it is best fitting, credits to appear where we feel best, fades and much more.
We would love the editing to reflect how hard we worked on this film, and don't want it to be the let down. This is turn will allow the audience to enjoy the film with the editing placed perfectly. Which is why we are using Pinnacle Studio Plus. -Anthony Wilson
Why we Chose to use Pinnacle Studio
At first our group was against using Pinnacle Studio as we wanted to use an editing program that nobody else was using. Harvey suggested we use his £500 Adobe After Effects and as a group we thought this was a good idea. However after seeing the program in action we decided against it as it is more for putting in special effects then editing. Also it is really quite complex and our group only had limited experience with this program. After thinking about some other programs we decided to just use Pinnacle.
We chose Pinnacle because it is extremely user friendly but you can also add in some flashy special effects. It is also very similar to Windows Movie Maker which almost everyone has experience using. I have personally had a lot of experience with editing software and I find Pinnacle to be great for editing. It is so easy to cut clips and add in special effects which isn't the case in most editing software. - Jack Windsor
































